雅思写作的范文欣赏:科技发展和问题

发布时间:2013-09-03 14:39:23 来源:杭州朗阁培训中心 编辑:杭州朗阁小编
  雅思作文是有三大基本结构:1、雅思作文的introduction的功能在于把读者(考官)引入到你的essay里面,introduction也分三个部分,第一部分...

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  雅思作文是有三大基本结构:1、雅思作文的introduction的功能在于把读者(考官)引入到你的essay里面,introduction也分三个部分,第一部分general statement.第二部分narrowing process.第三部分thesis statement.雅思的大作文,字数太少,所以introduction不能写太多,因此第一部分和第二部分就尽量在少的字数中包含多的信息量。

  【例】The introduction of a Task 2 answer should begin with a general statement or idea of your own that takes into account the key topic words or their synonyms. The last sentence of the introduction should include a thesis statement which shows the point of  view or direction that will be taken in the answer.

  2、雅思作文的body paragraphs

  这是整篇雅思作文的核心,考生需要在这一部分叙述清楚所有的原因,现象和其他的想要表达的东西。注意,这一部分写完的时候,不要占用所有的字数,为结尾留些。

  3、雅思作文的conclusion

  conclusion的功能在于告诉读者(考官)论述结束了,所以他有两个半部分.半个部分就是transition signal,就是in conclusion,to sum up这样的词,别忘记写。

  下面,杭州朗阁小编为大家整理了雅思写作的范文欣赏:科技发展和问题,大家可以参考下。

  We sure live differently from our parents did decades ago. The changes are wide and profound. At the same time, we are facing challenges and problems unknown in the past. Could we find solutions to problems created by scientific development? The answer seems to be no.

  Some of the most obvious problems caused by technological advances lie in the IT industry. At a time when we did not have computers and electronic bank services, people took money with them and paid by cash. If they were stolen, only the amount they had with them was lost. But now credit cards are more commonly used in shopping malls and other places, crimes again us have become more serious and caused greater losses to people. A thief may tape the code of your credit card and make a copy of it. Then he could safely withdraw all your money from an ATM machine. Crimes such as this are very sticky to solve because there is no witness and the surveillance cameras give little help to the police.

  Another example is the issue of information control with the media industry including TV networks and Internet that give easy access to information without discrimination to people’s age. This has created a huge problem for parents and schools because teenage people are particularly vulnerable to adult materials and information violent in nature. In the past, when most information came in the form of print, it was relatively easy to control what children read. When a parent put away a book unsuitable for children, they were cut off from the source of information. With computer parents could use software to filter bad web sites but could not prevent new ones from appearing every day.

  People are working very hard to solve such problems that come along with advances in science and technology, but the efforts are not sufficient and not very successful. Even with the little progress we have achieved, we find ourselves defeated by new problems with greater complexity and in wider scope.

  In conclusion, developments in many fields of our life have brought us both benefits and problems. Developments in the banking industry give us greater convenience but making us targets of computer-based theft. Changes in media industry expose young people to inappropriate information difficult for parent’s control. However up until now, we have not successfully found permanent solutions yet.

  雅思作文的基本结构是雅思写作的基础,无论是多么复杂的雅思作文形式,都必须具备雅思作文年的基本结构。一个雅思作文的基本结构有三个部分,introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion。

  雅思写作的四大解题结构

  第一类:平衡写结构

  第二类:分析问题解决途径类议论文

  第三类:让步反驳类议论文(正反反)

  第三类:让步反驳类议论文(反正反)

  第三类:让步反驳类议论文(正反正反)

  第四类:一边倒支持类议论文


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