雅思写作开头段该怎么写?

发布时间:2014-10-03 21:41:07 来源:杭州朗阁培训中心 编辑:杭州朗阁小编
今天杭州朗阁雅思培训小编给各位考生们来分享一篇雅思写作开头段该怎么写的相关信息,希望对考生们的雅思写作的考试和备考能有所帮助!
       以前我们在中学时代写语文作文的时候老师就告诉过我们一个真理,那就是作文的黄金结构是,龙头-猪肚-豹尾,这也说明了一篇作文的开头是十分重要的,其实在雅思写作考试中也使用这个原理,如果你的雅思写作开头写的很好,往往会给考官带来不错的印象,会给你的雅思写作增色不少,那么雅思写作开头段该怎么写呢,今天杭州朗阁杭州雅思培训小编就给大家介绍一些方法!
雅思写作开头段该怎么写?
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       方法一:显示出创造性,模板痕迹不要太过明显
       比如可以从world governor 或者man/ woman作为切入点,避免直接谈到话题,而是“后退一步”从话题的部分内容中切入
       It's generally agreed that women are more considerate and patient than men.  However, would the world be more peaceful if women were the governor of the  world? Personally, I believe that women are better governors than men.
       Undoubtedly, women and men should be treated equally. However, when it  comes to governing the world, it seems that most of the governors are males just  as the word "history" indicates history is "his story", not "her story". In my  point of view, women would make better governors if given the chance.
       方法二:可以考虑抛开背景知识,采用其他的开篇手法
       At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturally  form an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun always  shines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.
       Have you ever considered why the world should be governed by males most of  the time? Has it ever occurred to you that women might make more competent  leaders and the world would be more peaceful under their leadership? I sincerely  believe that women could at least make equally capable leaders as men if not  better.
       Sometimes while looking back on the trip, one may find that seemingly the  road has always been bumpy and muddy and sadly the driver has been a man most of  the time. Some people may therefore come to a misunderstanding that it is the  man driver who has made the voyage uncomfortable and even miserable. It is the  same case when it comes to the human being's history. I sincerely believe that  whether the society is more violent and conflicting may not have a close  relationship with the gender of the leader.
       通常我们不希望学生以一句话开头,不方便在第一段过早提出自己的所有理由,否则会导致body paragraphs  没有新观点引出。当然在第一段直接提出观点也不是不可以的。
       例如
       I don't think there will be any possibilities to make such an assumption as  to whether the world would be more peaceful if the world were governed by women.  However, I believe that women may not make better leaders than men.
       方法三: 采用3句式 rephrase the title + quote others' opinions + make one's own point  clear
       用一个好的句式 Recently there has been a hot debate in the public over the issue  whether the world would be more peace if women governed the world.
       用动词变化和连词连接观点 Some people believe that women would be better governors while  other people couldn't agree.
       提出自己的观点,如果现在还没有明确的观点,可以虚晃一枪 I will analyze the two opinions and then give  my own point of view.
       以上就是杭州朗阁小编整理的雅思写作开头段该怎么写的相关信息,其中提到了三种方法,希望大家在雅思写作备考中都可以尝试一下,写好文章之后可以找前辈或者培训班的老师负责批改一下,看雅思写作水平是否有所提高,最后杭州朗阁小编预祝各位考生在雅思写作考试中都能获得好成绩!

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