雅思写作:经典错误案例解析

发布时间:2014-01-13 13:47:18 来源:杭州朗阁培训中心 编辑:杭州朗阁小编
很多考生的雅思作文拿不到高分,其实是考生的作文存在很多问题。今天,杭州雅思培训小编用具体的例子告诉考生错误的地方和改正的方法...

       很多考生的雅思作文拿不到高分,其实是考生的作文存在很多问题。今天,杭州雅思培训小编用具体的例子告诉考生错误的地方和改正的方法。

      “见官死”开头之一:观点模糊态度暧昧 

  典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? 
 
  This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 
 
 
  典型失败案例: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? 
 
  I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me…… 
\
 
  “见官死”开头之二:中式英文人见人晕 
 
  典型失败案例:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life 
 
  In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…… 
 
  Topic 2- The population problem 
 
  The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there. 
 
  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? 
 
  I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things…… 
 
  “见官死”开头之三:偏离主题无轨电车 
 
  典型失败案例:Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题) 
 
  I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places. 
 
  “见官死”开头之四:开门见山 直奔主题 
 
  In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 
 
  Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题) 
 
  Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. 
 
  “见官死”开头之五:语法错误惨不忍睹 
 
  典型失败案例:Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题) 
 
  About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should. 
 
  “见官死”开头之六:过分简单没有重点 
 
  典型失败案例:Topic-The importance of environmental protection 
 
  This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it! 
 
  “见官死”开头之七:用词不当 表达不准 
 
  典型失败案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? 
 
  I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family. 
 
  “见官死”开头之九:中国俗语胡乱翻译 
 
  典型失败案例:Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family? 
 
  I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”…… 
 
  正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children 
 
  Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance? 
 
  We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”…… 
 
  “见官死”开头之十: 观点武断 态度强硬 
 
  典型失败案例:Topic1-The importance of confidence 
 
  In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed. 
 
  Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem 
 
  I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more 
   
      以上就是小编整理的始终经典错误和解决方案,希望考生们能记住这几种错误,千万不要在自己的作文中出现这些错误。

杭州朗阁培训中心——杭州雅思培训首选,您最明智的选择。

       杭州朗阁雅思培训正在火热招生中,10-15小班授课,多年从教名师指导,专门为您订制的个性化服务,系统有效的技巧点拨,让你的雅思考程走的更轻松。
来雅思官网报名,优惠立享!
咨询QQ:2687425980 
网上咨询:http://hz.longre.cn
联系地址: 杭州市延安路398号(孩儿巷口)二轻大厦B座10层

本文网址:http://hz.longre.cn/xiezuo/1068-5494.html

雅思写作文章
课程预约
  • 姓名:

    性别:

  • 电话:

    E-mail:

  • 计划学习时间: 1-3月 4-6月 下半年 寒暑假 还没有明确计划
  • 英语程度: 初高中 四六级 六级以上
  • 课程内容:
热门中心地址

关于朗阁

杭州朗阁培训中心隶属朗阁教育集团,成立于1999年,是中国最大的雅思、新托福培训基地之一。 [详细]

400-1188-782 24小时免费咨询电话
8:30-20:30 朗阁教师团队在线解答

师资力量

  • 高景怡 Brenda
  • Hailey  宋琼
  • Young 刘洋
  • Addie 孙洋洋
  • Criss 杨楠
  • Yvonne 张亦奇
  • River  何流
  • 李婧婉 Echo
  • Cara 崔利柯
  • 朱亚琼 Tiffany
  • 高景怡 Brenda0
  • 高景怡 Brenda
    高景怡 Brenda 杭州朗阁写作主讲

    高景怡 Brenda
  • Hailey  宋琼
    Hailey 宋琼  【主讲】雅思听力、口语、阅...

    Hailey  宋琼
  • Young 刘洋
    刘洋Young  【主讲】托福口语,剑桥EIM,托...

    Young 刘洋
  • Addie 孙洋洋
    孙洋洋能够快速地掌握学生学习弱项,有针对性...

    Addie 孙洋洋
  • Criss 杨楠
    Criss 杨楠【主讲】托福阅读,托福听力【简介...

    Criss 杨楠
  • Yvonne 张亦奇
    Yvonne 张亦奇【主讲】托福阅读【介绍】英语...

    Yvonne 张亦奇
  • River 何流
    【主讲】雅思听力口语基础语法【简介】雅思总...

    River  何流
  • 李婧婉 Echo
    雅思7 5分,听力9分。以优异Merit成绩毕业于...

    李婧婉 Echo
  • Cara 崔利柯
    杭州北美部长——北美掌门人【主讲】雅思,托...

    Cara 崔利柯
  • 朱亚琼 Tiffany
    毕业于全球排名第30名的英国布里斯托大学社会...

    朱亚琼 Tiffany
  • 高景怡 Brenda
    高景怡 Brenda 杭州朗阁写作主讲

    高景怡 Brenda

扫描二维码
微信有惊喜