我正回家 I am going back my home.
Correct: I am going home.
他得体温下降了His temperature went down.
Correct: His temperature came down.
我喜欢绿色I like green color.
Correct: like green.
如果你有钱请给我 Give me money, if you have.
Correct: Give me money, if you have any.
请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。Please hurry to walk or we'll be late.
Correct: Please hurry up or we'll be late.
她由嫉妒转向失望。She was so jealous that she became desperate.
Correct: Jealousy drove her to despair.
.我很喜欢它。I very like it.
Correct: I like it very much.
不要靠近玻璃 Don’t step on the grass.
Correct: Keep off the grass.
我一周拿两次薪水I get my salary twice a month.
Correct: I get paid twice a month
黄山正在读书。Samuel is reading a book.
Correct: Samuel is reading.
我遇到了很多困难。I am having many difficulties.
Correct: I am having a few problems / lots of problems.